Can you feel me?
Can you feel me in your heart?
Can you feel me give you comfort
when the tears begin to start?
Can you hear me?
Can you hear me whisper in your ear?
Can you hear my voice calling you
and drawing you so near?
Can you taste me?
Can you taste the blood I shed?
Can you taste my broken body
in your Communion bread?
Can you see me?
Can you see me in the skies?
Can you see my love reflected
within your mother's eyes?
Can you touch me?
Can you touch me with a prayer?
Can you praise my name in Glory
or come to me in your despair?
Do you know me?
Do you have me in your heart?
Have you read my written word
with my message to impart?
I am waiting!
I am knocking at your door!
My arms are opened wide
and you can live forever more!
I'll accept you!
I'll accept you as you are!
I'll forgive your tainted past
and your sins, I'll disregard.
Crucifixion!
I was hung upon a cross!
I suffered for the Hopeless;
The Unbelievers and the Lost!
But, Death--
couldn't hold me in the grave
and Yes--I'm Living--
and through Me, you can be saved!
Author notes
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In a list
A contest entry
- Best Prewrites! by movedon.
1750 points, ended May 8, 363 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a wondrfully penned write, I love it, sounds like a hymn, I am sure many children could sing to this and learn from it as well, This is beautiful.
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Truly amazing write you have fear, filled to the brim with truth.
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Great! It get's the Lord's message out in a very meaningful way!
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'The Way the Truth and the Life'.
I hear this coming from a sincerity, yearning for Truth and giving of hope where needed, brought out to expression in this 'write' from you.
Intentionally very immediate, clear and direct and you have succeeded very, very well.
Do you know me?
Do you have me in your heart?
Wonderful!
Sol
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Excellent
So very well done Such a great creation for the prompt. best of luck in the contest.
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Excellent work here indeed
Bless your heart for you have written the winner Im sure .He does live and often through our writtings he does come to play and bring love and faith to us all . GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST I so hope you win gold
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well I guess I have a new favorite,
unbelieveble, this gift you have,
so much diversity always so much heart.
I always believed that as you get more and more passionate for writing the better you get.
wow! it is not possible to have more passion for writing then you do.
always outstanding
my favorite subject perfected
God bless...
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Sigh <--- high praise from me!
Definitely stirs thoughts and emotions in me! Wonderful write!
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