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Wind Chime

That wind chime's music through the night...
if I get thirsty, and I might,
I'll just grab and can or two,
one for me and one for you.

We can chug-a-lug awhile,
admire our underwear's worn style
and scratch each other's backs and then
go outside for beer again.

Let's get the boat and take a sail...
on the lake... HUH?  We're in jail?

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Picture D of the beer wind chime

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  • Desire gold member
    July 20

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Wind Chime
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Love the first line which had me chuckling along with the ...scratch each other's backs and gotta love the admiration of underwear styles Wild as it may seem I kept seeing a hairy back mistaken for a bear This certainly gave me a chuckle ~I keep hearing reference to Miller Light- Have a Miller Light (now I am not promoting this drinky-heck I don't even drinky) Maybe I was getting Hey Miller- Have a Light
    Excellent take on the prompt~
    Funny images You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Humor also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    July 18

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    This is great Pink I wish you much luck in the contest but you should not need it best wishes and much love always

  • ian sawicki silver member
    July 17

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    a good piece of poetry, well we all need beer! it is an essential part of society and must be drunk by all, that is the law and the wind chimes sing it.
    a good piece of poetry, well we all need beer! it is an essential part of society and must be drunk by all, that is the law and the wind chimes sing it.
    a good piece of poetry, well we all need beer! it is an essential part of society and must be drunk by all, that is the law and the wind chimes sing it.
    a good piece of poetry, well we all need beer! it is an essential part of society and must be drunk by all, that is the law and the wind chimes sing it.
    a good piece of poetry, well we all need beer! it is an essential part of society and must be drunk by all, that is the law and the wind chimes sing it.


    • PinkPony
      July 17
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      I am holding your comment and memorizing it and it has caused my brain to explode. All that is left is a little fizz fizz fizz fizz fizz fizz fizzle splat. And that is that.

      lol

  • Pyragus
    July 16
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    hahaha that was cute, what an awesome poem!

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