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Lips (triolet)

I sought her lips painted ruby
Red that glistened wanting a kiss
'Twas a thought to capture beauty
I sought her lips painted ruby
only a dream what a pity
She never knew, never would miss
I sought her lips painted ruby
Red that glistened wanting a kiss


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  • Amera gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    This is beautiful! A romantic triolet that flows like magic. I like how the repeating line stops short waiting for the next word.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • LionessK
    July 17, 2008
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    lovely...