Peacefulness exudes
when tarnished negatives
are clarified
in enlightenment's syrup.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture: B
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Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Disentangled
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Love how You used: tarnished negatives and enlightenment's syrup- the reference for syrup
After reading I kept seeing like pancakes-hotcakes but shaped like yin yang and seeing Light pouring from a pitcher- it is so bright that one just sees a stream of radiance flow~for some reason seeing the fork like a Triquetra symbol- whether metaphor or symbolism
Hopefully that makes some sense
Excellent take on the prompt~
Powerful images You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
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Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~



