Even majestic seas
couldn’t tame her,
as she longed
to
fly.
Author notes
Picture D
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 10 Words IV - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 19, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank You For Your Time~
Thank You for Your entry: Undefeated
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ I noticed You still had word count of 11 in which this contest calls for 10 You have a Gorgeous piece and I would have loved to given this a Trophy or HM- but hopefully next time. I'll be having a pre-write contest soon~ Love how You used: majestic seas and reference to how the seas couldn't be tame and longing to fly- Very Creative indeed After reading Your words I was actually also seeing flying fish- jumping out of the water wanting to reach for the heavens- whether metaphor or symbolism
Hopefully that makes some sense
Excellent take on the prompt~
Powerful images You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Sorry about the 11 words, must have miscounted while writing and didn't see your first comment in time to fix it.
Thank you for such a great comment and the applause! -
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Thank You for taking the time to enter and I am sorry You did not make it back in time~ Loved Your piece-very Powerful in message and grabbed attention
I certainly wanted to award
Just adored it
I've miscounted before so I understand...
I'll be having a pre-write contest soon and hopefully You would consider entering Your verse in that
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Oh My~
Now I am reading Your piece and counting I am getting 11 Words
Oy~ I'll be back- for I will finish commenting and hopefully when I re-read- You will have 10 Words Best wishes~
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