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Alone.

Earth:

Wondrous
  Conceptual
    Revolutionary

Yet perceptively:

Why do I
  just want to be
    left alone?

Author notes

It's awful, I'm tired. That's that.

I chose picture A.

A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    November 23
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    Thank You!

    Thank You for Your Entry: Alone
    Appreciate Your Talent also Voice~
    Honored to read once more~Adding more *clappies*
    also best wishes to You in this PW contest Sweet Soul
    And ...I currently have a contest for 40 Words or less
    http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2466135

    This will be judged shortly
    Thank You for Your Patience
    Many blessings too
    with much love and light~ Desire~*~


  • Desire gold member
    August 14, 2008
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    Welcome Back!!

    Magnificent Your piece qualifies and elated to see You backBest wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • dustookie2
    August 12, 2008

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    Think we all at times just want the world to turn without us for awhile.We are social creatures all seeking love in some form and when we are ready to jump back we do. Beautifully expressed. Good luck in this contest.


  • Desire gold member
    July 20, 2008
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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Alone.
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Love how You brought forth a question after describing the benefits The perks so to speak- After reading I kept seeing word: marshmallow
    and how it can bring a smile to the face- how many uses it has- though when one eats it- it is basically tasteless but placed on a stick over an open fire- it is magical- whether metaphor or symbolism Wonderful message- Also I encourage in the AC- to lift Yourself up instead of tearing self down- Yes one maybe tired but I don't personally think this piece is awful-
    hopefully You would reconsider using that word to describe Your Voice written
    Hopefully that makes some sense
    Excellent take on the prompt~
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • movedon
    July 17, 2008
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    I think this is a feeling that everyone feels. This poem proves that you can change feelings. As, in your last poem [i love you], you spoke of how you didn't want "the person" to leave you. A wonderful write and when compared to other writes, can really show how the heart can change. Well done.

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • Kari gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    It's not aweful. I know that all of us have asked this at some point during life. I like it, and think that you did well


    • retribusive
      July 17, 2008
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      Thanks. I just edited the fifth line. It was bugging me.

      Thanks for the comment once again. It means quite a bit to me!

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