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Falling Forever

Damp from lifes
wave
tides erase me
giving peaceful sleep

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Picture C and D
10 words

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    July 21, 2008

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    Reminds me of a day in the rain and the cleansing power of it...yet the beginning weighs heavy as you feel as if life is overwhelming...that wave would be more then damping to me at the moment it would be drenching, for life sometimes does that to us...
    wonderfully spoken...
    Congrat's on the trophy
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  • Fourthaxis
    July 20, 2008

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    "Damp from lifes wave".....loved the feel of this. At the moment I am more than damp; drenched is more like it!!
    Liked the sleepy mood Congrats on the HM!
    Peace
    Anansey


  • Desire gold member
    July 19, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Falling Forever
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Love how You used: tides erase me The first line very Creative for I was seeing a female in the rain- first with an umbrella and then without as if she cast it aside- and danced in the rain- let the water wash all worries into the storm drain-
    Whether metaphor or symbolism
    Hopefully that makes some sense
    Excellent take on the prompt~
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~