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Drowning

Sank into a world
that stole breath
and chilled flesh

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I chose picture D

I changed the title too, cause i realized it was similar to another's...

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  • Desire gold member
    July 19, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Drowning
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Love the words: chilled flesh and after reading I was reminded of tar pits also sink holes-quick sand and how poor creatures fall victim- just swells my eyes Also wild as it sounds I was seeing an ice cube tray for Hallows Eve- with fingers in design~ Wild- Whether metaphor or symbolism
    Hopefully that makes some sense
    Excellent take on the prompt~
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~