You'll never shine as bright as the day you died.
Author notes
A suitcase and an old guitar-
from Patrick Hernandez: Born to be Alive
song: YouTube
Clear Your Mind- Step outside the box...
Look within and then spill some ink...
Idon't know how but...
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 10 Words IV - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 19, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
If I messed anything up I'm sorry and please point it out.
Comments
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i like it very nice
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: ...
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ I have to say when I first inhaled Your words- my jaw went agape- for I thought about it and was seeing reference to Spirit- Light- an orb etc- and back in the arms of the Creator- one becomes a shining star- Very Creative indeed for this lyrics line
Hopefully that makes some sense
Excellent take on the prompt~
Powerful images You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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