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Lives Forgotten

tides,

so subtle,

reminiscing in futile memories

of past lives

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  • piccola silver member
    May 22
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    Congrats on the gold and thank you for entering.


  • Desire gold member
    July 19, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Lives Forgotten
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ I must say when I first read this...the word that came to my Mind's Eye was an hourglass turned over and hearing reference to Julius Caeser for some reason- whether metaphor or symbolism~Love the words: futile memories also reference to past lives
    Also after reading was seeing skeletal remains of Lives lived- each one telling a story
    Hopefully that makes some sense
    Excellent take on the prompt~
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • movedon
    July 17, 2008

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    La la la la once again, I'm feeling raging jealousy for your obvious strong ability and talent to fit so much emotion in to few words. NO FAIR! Anyways, I like this one. "futile memories" really grabbed my attention. Memories are usually something that you have and that's it. I've never though of them being usless or futile. Acid mind trip...Well done!

    Warmest,
    Mylee