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Let Me Drown

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The place where it all began

Your sea of love



Lee

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Let the words be read, at every level in your mind

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  • TwilightAngel026
    August 1, 2008
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    Amazing, you manage to fit so much beauty and emotion into such small space and wording. Bravo!


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    July 21, 2008

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    How can you put so much
    feelings into such few
    words? Mr. you continue to
    amaze me. Love the picture.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce

  • Hummingbirdlover
    July 20, 2008
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    Your poems are so profound. Your thinking is awesome.


  • Desire gold member
    July 19, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Let Me Drown
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Love the words: sea of love
    and kept getting- very Creative with Life's introductory but also was seeing images of pansies in hand- I am getting word: pansies (flower) - whether metaphor or symbolism~
    Hopefully that makes some sense
    **Please please credit Photobucket in the AC-Thankies~
    Excellent take on the prompt~
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


    • Endeavor gold member
      July 20, 2008
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      Hi Desire


      Thank you for your thoughtfull comment
      I appreate the HM

      Always like your contest

      Rick


  • trista gold member
    July 19, 2008

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    Hi Rick,

    I fear...anything I can say, will be far more words than you've written here. lol But...I do like your thoughts, and love the pic to go with it.

    Nice job, Hon.

    Much love,
    ~J.


  • Providence
    July 19, 2008

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    I walked to the shore
    I swam with the moon
    and danced within a dream

    Beautiful Rick.


  • AmberMoon
    July 19, 2008

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    This is exactly how I feel... and I'm very good at drowning. ha.
    Keep up the good work!
    ~Eva


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    July 18, 2008
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    Such a nice place to drown...the sea of love!

    Nice words.

    Sue


  • Summer Dawn
    July 17, 2008
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    SO ROMANTIC


    • Endeavor gold member
      July 17, 2008
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      Hi Dawn


      Love Romantic
      Thank you for the three Smilies

      Rick


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    lovely vision,

    always so profound

    God bless...


    • Endeavor gold member
      July 17, 2008
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      Hi Pisces rainbow


      Thank you for carring for my vision
      for the picture given

      Rick


  • Tears of Roses
    July 17, 2008

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    Perfection!!!!

    Perfect from your title
    to the picture
    and finally to your words
    Encore Lee
    Hugs and Roses to you

    Teresa


    • Endeavor gold member
      July 17, 2008

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      Tears of Roses


      Thank you for saying perfect
      I realy liked the picture

      Pleased you liked this

      Rick


  • Stardust-luvr
    July 16, 2008

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    wow hun you took it to all levels and more from loves begining to loves ending dismay. breathing hope into many precious memories of the heart. I'm in aw and blessed to read your poetic wonders well done and many loving blessings always xxxx

    • Endeavor gold member
      July 17, 2008
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      Stardust-luvr


      Thank you for seeing so far into my words
      They may hold both joy, and loves dismay.

      The picture drew me in
      just as we are compelled by our own truths

      Life is all of this, and more
      and love amplifies the wonder
      of our passing thru this time

      I dred we do not live, a thousand years
      that we may be love that well, that long

      Rick

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