excerpt from Eos; volume i
(William assesses the other patients at the asylum.)
Indicated adjudged,
retarded and mixed.
therefore repugnantly degraded.
Oddments indeed!
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 10 Words IV - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 19, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Terrific Imagery
Well you have penned ten words of fantastic imagery to describe this powerful picture. Wow, it boogles my mind and brings thoughts of shear desperation of trying to hang on a slippery slope. I know that feeling well a few times. Just my thoughts on the picture and your fantastic word choice. This was a pleasure to read this morning. I like poems that make me think and feel. You take care
Always, Sandy
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Washed Upon the Shore
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Now this is one very Creative piece for I was reading and in my Mind's Eye was seeing a steward with a physician pacing the hall of doors- all metal with viewing windows-
however it was like each door housed a different oddity I kept seeing the last dish hope effort reaching for the shores- whether metaphor or symbolism~
Hopefully that makes some sense
Thank You for the reference underneath the picture and obviously I did not count that as part of the ten words in case anybody wonders
**Please please credit Photobucket in the AC-Thankies~
Excellent take on the prompt~
Powerful images You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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In just a few words you have brought the picture to live...well done! Take care.
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this is a lovely poem hun,
i like it alot! its beautiful,
as always you have great wording,
all my love,
kitty xxx
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