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your mess is irreversible; you can't escape your past.

I’m just one of the many things that fit in your closet.
& baby you should get a bigger room because your skeletons are escaping.

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  • sighingflosser.
    October 26
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    you are a poet.
    this is a poem.
    you are beautiful.
    this is beautiful.

  • Virgoan
    July 31, 2008

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    I like this. The only preference that i like is that providing line breaks will make this a better piece that this is now. Still, a good work.

    Thanks for sharing your gift.


    HENSLEY


  • aanika
    July 29, 2008

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    you're in the finalists
    and im not
    seeeee you're better than me !
    but seriously i like this a lot
    it works better as a short poem than as part of another one

  • aanika
    July 18, 2008
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    i really really really like this!
    lots of imagery.
    i'm actually imagining a closet full of skeletons though ..
    not a pretty thought.