::MALE SERIAL KILLER/FEMALE VICTIM::
((A HEADS UP,I TRIED TO MAKE THIS AS SICK AS POSSIBLE FOR SHOCK FACTOR))
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Beneath the glistening moon of lunacy slithers
the shadows of temptation, awakening my bloodlust.
I can feel my flesh whither at the thought of death,
the very thought of her convulsing in my iron claws.
Patience lies at my feet, belly up in submission as
I whisper incoherently to my shaking blade.
"Want to know why i use a knife?"
i hiss into darkness.
As i speak, i slide my hand into my pocket,
pulling out a black handled sharpener.
The blade screeches as i run it through the slit,
grinning as the grinding noise echoes through the fog.
"I use them....
so i can feel the softness of flesh
beneath this cold steel.
Feeling the body quiver in agony.
Small cuts, deep lacerations, torture,
i prefer the middle myself.
But i don't always use a knife....
sometimes......
yessss, sometimes, i use a scalpel....
i fantasize about you, about USSSS.
Murder by knife, so sadistic yet so reflective.
In your last moments, AT THIS MOMENT,
aren't you grasping at reasons to live?
Ahhh yess, you are, I AM GIVING YOU a reason
to appreciate life my dear,
you are so sweet, warm, innocent,
LISTEN to me...LISTEN to my words."
Tunnels twist through my sickened mind,
winding, spinning, losing control of what is real.
I AM GOD INSIDE MY HEAD, nightmares becoming reality.
Angels caress my body with spell binding insanity,
playing tricks behind my eyes as I bow my head in prayer.
Before me writhes a devil with Heaven's face,
her beauty cascading from clouds masked by sin.
I mimic the Christian cross to complete my ritual and
flash the knife before her face, her terror evident.
She struggles against her bindings, the tree thick,
the barbed wire slicing into her delicate little wrists.
I smile, the moon catching my piercing glare as she closes
her eyes in horror, pleading through the silken gag.
Behind her I walk, kissing her soft neck, gently sucking
yet hard enough to feel her arteries pound hysterically.
"I don't think you fully understand the power i
have over you, the strength and control i possess."
My voice is dark, seductive as i run the blade along the
inside of her arms, goosebumps rising on chilled skin.
"You should FEAR me right now,
fear what i plan to do to you.
I will show you things,
wonderful, terrible things, and
you shall fully comply.
Your nerves are twisting, rotting at
my touch, i can smell your terror my dear.
Quite honestly, you're turning me on,
the smell of death get me off...."
I let my knife trace her nipples as I slowly slide my hand
along her thigh, inching up until I hear her gasp as I penetrate.
Gently, I slide the blade down her belly, tracing a line
where my knife shall soon rest.
I watch her ever so closely as her eye's roll back,
her body convulsing, terrorized.
I let out a low chuckle, breathing in her ear
as i click my tongue, shaking my head disapprovingly:
"Shhhhh my dear, quiet now,
you even so much as try to scream,
and I'll slit your pretty throat.....though
maybe, I WANT to hear you scream....."
I hiss as I work on her, feeling her body respond to my touch.
"Maybe, I LIKE making women BEG for their life,
ohhhh don't think I haven't done this before you little CUNT.
cause I have, I have butchered so many of you little whores
and enjoyed it every step of the way."
I grin wider as I feel her bladder release
taking the time to inhale the smell as I find this just
as pleasurable as the actual act of murder itself.
My tongue coats my lips with saliva as i lick them,
proceeding to nip the side of her face.
I work my way down her throat, dragging my tongue
between her breasts as she reluctantly responds.
I chuckle darkly as my tongue glides up her thighs,
tasting her urine as i begin to roughly lick her clit.
I work on her a while, sliding the tip of the blade up
her legs as i gently bite the insides of her thighs.
Despite her fear, i feel the enjoyment she feels as
her orgasm nears, but i'm a cruel man, stopping before that point.
I stand up and walk behind her, filthy fuckin whore.
Slowly, I stroke the blade back up her stomach and pull her
head back at an angle, the knife pressed hard against her throat as
my fingers begin to pinch her nipples, feeling them harden.
I lower my voice to a serpent’s whisper,
letting my breath graze her sweat-sheened flesh:
"They screamed for me to stop, begged me to spare them,
but spare them I did not."
Sadisticly i click the blade against the tree,
just missing her ear as her body stiffens.
The sound is haunting as her sobs rack her
petite, little frame.
Again, my hands wander, i want her to feel pleasure
before i end her pathetic life.
I penetrate her yet again, hearing her moan involuntarily.
"Have you ever tasted raw flesh, my dear?
Mmmm, it's something you will try before you die.....
they all tried it, their tears my dessert after I
consumed them as they struggled for life.
Their bodies were so warm, so useless, worthless...
They were FUCKIN WORTHLESS SCUM TO THE HUMAN RACE
so I gave them a purpose, a reason to be alive and
a reason to have died....."
Tightly, i suddenly wrap one arm across her chest
as if pulling her closer to my body.
Violently, i bite into the side of her warm neck,
deep enough to cause her to bleed as i rub her clit.
Her throat is so soft in my teeth,
the elasticity of flesh bending beneath the strain as
her pulse throbs viciously inside my mouth.
"You have always wanted this,
DON'T YOU FUCKIN LIE...."
My voice was a growl as I suddenly raised the knife,
waiting for her to react.
I let my eyes slide shut as I envisioned it for a few
seconds, letting the horror of what was about to happen sink in.
I thrived off the torture as the smell of urine became noticeable
yet again, her bladder the first to react.
I felt pleasure course through my veins as the moment then came,
a force causing me to brutally thrust the blade
into her smooth, scarless belly.
Her animalistic screams caused me to have an erection as I
dropped my pants, standing before her naked.
The knife tore bits of flesh as I began to fuck her,
ripping the blade up to her breast bone as her intestines
fell upon our sweating bodies.
My eyes rolled back in my head as I hacked off skin and
muscle, ripping her gag from her mouth.
"EAT IT YOU FUCKIN CUNT....." I screamed,
lost inside my own mind.
She choked and sputtered, fighting the urge to vomit
I'm sure
as I replaced the gag, her bloody skin trapped inside.
"Come on.....DO....YOU....WANT...TO....DIE?
BEG for it you little whore, BEG.....
I can taste your blood, your fear, your life,
this is why you were put on this earth, I AM THE REASON,
you taste so good, don't you.....
so sweet, my little bird, it's sooooooo sweet....."
I snarl gruffly.
Finally, I couldn't take it anymore and in one quick motion,
slit her throat from ear to ear.
She gasped and bucked against me in the throes of death,
her blood splattering my chest and neck as I pulled out.
I heard the eerie, familiar gasp as she tried to breathe,
her throat opening with each gallon of blood she lost.
Finally, exhausted,
I stepped back as she sank against her binds, drained
of all life.
Such a pity really, how one so beautiful could end so
tragically as I slipped off into the dark.
Bowing my head again, I prayed over her lost little soul,
knowing that I was her judge and executioner.
I was her God, and I sent her home......
Author notes
EDITED BY: Lady Voldemort
IT TURNED OUT TO BE WAY LONGER THAN I HAD ANTISSIPATED, haha, so sorry for the length. Hope it isn't to boring, lol
hope this doesn't offend anyone and if it does, i'm very sorry. I gave the warning......my advice, TAKE IT
::Syn::
ONE OTHER THING, I DO NOT HAVE INTENTIONS OF EVER BEING A KILLER, READ MY AP PAGE AND YOU'LL FIND OUT HOW I SEE THINGS WHEN I WRITE. I am not a serial killer, I NEVER WANT TO TAKE A LIFE AND I NEVER WILL. I'm the victim in all of my writes.....those who know me know this....
A contest entry
- Macabre Medicines! by Lost Vampyre Angel.
1200 points, ended August 24, 2008, 52 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow speechless all I can say is it wasn't to long and it was amazing
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you never cease to amaze me. You have amazing talent. I love the beauty your words paint, even if the content is about as violent as it could get. I wish i could writer like this. Very well done
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WOW!
That was awesome.. I love it when people are able to make you feel whats going on, I actually have a slight ache on my neck now like a knife has slightly cut it.
You are an amazing writer, I wouldn't change anything about this write it's perfect I especially love the line
"Sadistically i click the blade against the tree,
just missing her ear as her body stiffens.
The sound is haunting as her sobs rack her
petite, little frame.
Again, my hands wander, i want her to feel pleasure
before i end her pathetic life.
I penetrate her yet again, hearing her moan involuntarily."
I can just see that part so clearly.
Excellent write.
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omg. this is my favorite. i fuckin love it!!!!!!!!! i've been lookin for twisted poems all day that are good...and this one beats any poem i've read before...there's just so much detail and i felt like i was watching this happen. i couldn't even stop reading =]
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that honestly was a mondblowing trip
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cool as usual
i especialy like the ritualistic aspect, not alot of murder writes include that sort of thing, but i think ritualistic murders are more twisted than passionate murders because the killer gets a sort of religius fix off of it, plus the justification for them is usualy pretty sick too. -
wow I like this one.I can make a mind movie in my head.
*Sara*
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WOW this is AMAZING i must be sick because this seriously turned me on.. i mean seriously this mix of pleasure and murder is hot!! wow this is just breath taking exactly along the lines i was looking for.
all my love
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It's definately not boring it's great your imagery is incredible
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Very well written, It sounds like my shit, only It isn't me writing it.... I love it...
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WOW great poem
I wish i had half the talent you've got. This poem was overall good and really detailed but one of my favorite parts was:
I whisper incoherently to my shaking blade.
Tunnels twist through my barren chambers,
winding, spinning, losing control of what is real.
I AM GOD INSIDE MY HEAD, nightmares becoming reality.
and the end was beautiful as well. Good job. One of my favorites on here.
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Wowzer!!
Stunning! Been far to long since the last one! This is awesome girl, the graphic imagery rocked big time.
Dripping with goodness, had me from start to finish. May just be me but I also saw a lot of beauty in the way your wrote this, for example..
"Angels carress my body with spell binding insanity,
playing tricks behind my eye's as i bow my head in prayer.
Before me writhes a devil with heaven's face,
her beauty cascading from clouds masked by sin."
Superb! It makes a great combination IMO. *bows to your extreme talent* Hope to see many, many more!
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very nice read
u shud check out the band . -
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yeahhh, i definitely know who Twiztid is ^_^
they are pretty good, not overly familiar with their music but i like what i've heard. Love the video for "We Don't Die," least i think that's the title? -
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never heard Twiztid really, i'll check em out on utube.
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lol, my mistake. I thought that was who you were talking about. What band then?? -
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I was talkin abt the melodic death metal band called "The Black Dahlia Murder". I also checked out Twiztid, but unfortunately, i don't like rap...
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OMG!
I fuckin love the Black Dahlia Murder. Actually, i did a guitar cover of the song "THe Blackest Incarnation." It came out pretty good, not the best cover in the world. lol.
As far as rap goes, I CAN'T FUCKIN STAND rap but there are a few artists i don't mind (NONE OF THEM are main stream cause that shit sucks). I don't mind some of the bands off of serial killin' records, they have some BRUTAL stuff (some of the vocals are growling/metal-ish and some are rap though NOT annoying in the least.
MY STYLE OF MUSIC IS MORE INDUSTRIAL/EBM STUFF......I JUST LOVE the dark, heavy vocals. Some of it is very dark and murderous, in fact, that style of music is a HUGE influence in my serial killer writes
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WOW this is amazing, really i missed your writes!!
this is like fucking amazing lovely im adding it to my list of fave poems its amazing!!!! never stop writing,
all my love,
kitty xxx -
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haha
awwwww, thanks so muich *hugs*
my computer is really lagging tonight, it's extremely slow,
i write like, 5 lines and then i have to wait for the computer to catch up. I'm fuckin done with this thing, haha, and absolutely NOT going back and fixing type-O's that i may make in response to your comment,
yeah,
i figured it's been a while since i've written on here nad i kinda needed to get this shit out
thanks again hun, lots of luv ^_^
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as always... LOVE ITTTTT!! I will refrain from the bad puns again *laughs* I hope you know what I mean, haha
there were some grammar and spelling errors - I don't feel like going back and pointing them out right now cause I'm really tired *laughs* but if you want me to edit it later just send it to me and I'll go through it
other than that, it was really fuckin cool Keep writing.
MORSMORDRE!
- The Dark Lady
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THANKS SO MUCH HUN!!!
OH OH! LOOK!
i even gave you credit, W00T!
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thanks
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YAY FOR CAMERA WHORE!!!!!
W00T, GO YOU! lmao
*dances around merrily*
*rolls down a hill*
*and so on and so forth*
haha, yeah, i can be a little loose iwth the spelling sometimes,
you could maybe copy it and paste it into a word document and message me the fixed piece if you want? Maybe?
you really don't have to though
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WOW
that was a good story a real good one keep up the work -
..::BRILLIANT::..
FUCKIN STUNNING!!!! This was an absolute masterpiece, I loved the intense atmosphere, it was as if I was in that situation, and the erotica involved surely gave me a reaction lol. The gore and horror filled up most of my head though, it was so capturing. As always your pieces are bloody glorious and this was one of my favourites from you. Great effort, loved every bit, amazing work, keep em coming!!
~Emily~ xx
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awwww.....
THANKS SO MUCH!
*great big hug*
yeah, so writing these pieces is so much fun because i get to commit these acts to poetry, awkward, huh?
I put myself in the place of the victim and think to myself, "Ok, now what would scare the living shit out ofme yet not be so bad if it happened in real life?"
So want to know what that means??
NO VICTIM EVER GETS THEIR BONES BROKEN! haha,
as twisted as that act itself may be,
anyway, thanks so much for your comment hun!!!!!!!
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