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"Together Forever"

I walk and search,
To find that one person.
That person I can care for.
I thought it was you,
When I found you hiding,
But then I lost you.
So I searched again.
I kept finding you,
hiding in that same spot,
But you would always run away.
Then one day I thought I found someone else.
Yet again I found out it was only you.
So i keep trying to find someone new,
But all I can find is you.
Now in this empty, vast forest,
That should be filled with all sorts of life,
I keep searching for someone.
Hoping its not you,
But in my heart,
I want it to be you,
And I want you to stay.
So please when I find you again,
In this deep, dark forest,
Stay here by my side,
So we can be together.
Together Forever.

Author notes

Okay maybe not exactly as you wanted, but similar I do believe. ^^"

I'd have to say options:

1.Write about finding true love.
2.Write about waiting for love to com
3.Write about wondering where your true love is

also with like three except Wondering who your true love is...in a way

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  • Ally
    July 31, 2008

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    Yeah you're right, its not quite what i wanted but it's still nice. The concept of not wanting to love someone, but finding it's impossible not to, is one i like. however i was a bit confused in places but its still a good write.
    Thank you and good luck!


  • lightswitches
    July 26, 2008
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    this is pretty good. And very well written.


    • B.m.w
      July 26, 2008
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      Thank you. Really it was just a random write a year ago.