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like the night


dark and crisp,
a chill glitters
crystals through your
spine, and you know
he'll always be
watching; ever so
proud of you.
forever there,
like the night
time.

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so my girlfriend's nonno died within the last 2 months, and she was just feeling pretty down about it the other night, so I wrote this for her.

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  • girl shaman
    July 22, 2008

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    thats very considerate of you; im sure she's very happy that she has you keep writing
    oh and thank you for the add