The purest love is so hard to find.
So many distractions,
So many "what ifs,"
So many ways to have your heart stolen
or make you think so.
So many tricks and sweet nothings said
that make you wonder who really is the one.
It's wonderful to know what is real.
It's relieving.
Like breathing crisp mountain air on a chilly fall day.
Like diving into a cool pool on a scorching summer day.
Like watching a romantic fairy tale movie and seeing the main characters hoplessly in love, and you realize that you have that for real.
True love is so hard to find.
So many people pressuring you.
So many ads discouraging you.
So many self esteem hits to make doubt yourself
so you doubt their feelings toward you.
So many people choosing wrongly
that make you wonder what is right at all.
It's wonderful to know you chose right.
It's relieving.
Like resting after hours on end of intense labor.
Like seeing a good grade on a test you've nearly killed yourself over.
Like reading about a lost true love reunited after so much torment and the unbelievable description of the way they feel, and you realize that you feel that for real.
You can think of no one better to share your life with than this person.
You have a never dieing attraction to none but this person.
You have withdrawals from leaving after only a few hours with this person.
You are so impatient to spend all eternity with this person.
You can tell in their eyes that all they want in the world is this person.
They can think of no one better to share their life with than you.
They have a never dieing attraction to none but you.
They have withdrawals from leaving after only a few hours with you.
They are so impatient to spend all eternity with you.
They can tell in your eyes that all you want in the world is this person.
The purest true love is so hard to find.
But it is well worth the effort.
So many distractions,
So many "what ifs,"
So many ways to have your heart stolen
or make you think so.
So many tricks and sweet nothings said
that make you wonder who really is the one.
It's wonderful to know what is real.
It's relieving.
Like breathing crisp mountain air on a chilly fall day.
Like diving into a cool pool on a scorching summer day.
Like watching a romantic fairy tale movie and seeing the main characters hoplessly in love, and you realize that you have that for real.
True love is so hard to find.
So many people pressuring you.
So many ads discouraging you.
So many self esteem hits to make doubt yourself
so you doubt their feelings toward you.
So many people choosing wrongly
that make you wonder what is right at all.
It's wonderful to know you chose right.
It's relieving.
Like resting after hours on end of intense labor.
Like seeing a good grade on a test you've nearly killed yourself over.
Like reading about a lost true love reunited after so much torment and the unbelievable description of the way they feel, and you realize that you feel that for real.
You can think of no one better to share your life with than this person.
You have a never dieing attraction to none but this person.
You have withdrawals from leaving after only a few hours with this person.
You are so impatient to spend all eternity with this person.
You can tell in their eyes that all they want in the world is this person.
They can think of no one better to share their life with than you.
They have a never dieing attraction to none but you.
They have withdrawals from leaving after only a few hours with you.
They are so impatient to spend all eternity with you.
They can tell in your eyes that all you want in the world is this person.
The purest true love is so hard to find.
But it is well worth the effort.
Author notes
I tried not to make it like all my other love poems, but i could have gone on and on trying to describe how it feels to be in love because- it's just not something to describe. I hope it is to your expectations.
I may make the title shorter, I just wanted that quote in here somewhere and I felt like I would be forcing it into the poem so....yeah
A contest entry
- Make me want to fall in love (2) by Spiritual Soul.
1000 points, ended July 19, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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another I havent read yet.. but its sweet! congrats on the Honorable Mention on it

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This was wonderful I really liked it. True love isn't something you just describe, but you did a great job! Thanks for entering my conetst!
Blessings,
~Michaela~


