I can be what you want me to be your sister or an aunt
I can be there when you fall
To catch you like a sister should
I can be there when your scared jus like an aunt should be
Together we can stay up late and chat the night away like little girls do
But don't forget there are rules to everything
And its hard to control
But one day we will grow up and realize this was all a dream and realize I am your aunt but don't forget we can be sisters to
A contest entry
- ~Help me create an AP family~ by BeautifulNitemare.
600 points, ended October 6, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very nice, you forgot a t in your just. so it is jus. On the fourth line hun, besides that it is pretty good. you really do go out of your way for people a lot.
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you sound like you would be a good aunt =) not the greatest of poems, but it was i asked for
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Eh..
I know that this is supposed to be one of those "I have your back, let me into your AP family" type thing, but I'd have to say I didn't enjoy this much.
Reorganize your thoughts a bit, and you'd have a good poem.
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