From the moment of conception
to the end of time,
there is no end!
Our lives are but
a time of trial,
do good,
or bad!
Four places exist in the end
Heaven,
Purgatory,
Limbo or
Hell!
It's up to you to choose...
a blessing or
a curse;
life or
death!
So choose
well!
Author notes
My belief on immortality.
A contest entry
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I'm liking what I read. Do you think I'm being biased because you're a home-girl. Nope, I'm liking what I read.
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wow this is excellent, i like it very much indeed, great rhythm and flow
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Yeah, we all have to choose well. Very good piece!
Thnx for entering & Best of Luck
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GloriousGift
Heba -
Yes, but.......
Good thought! I only STRONGLY disagree with one part of this: "Four places exist in the end". The Bible mentions only TWO: Heaven and Hell! The other 2, "purgatory" and "limbo" come from mythology, and have no basis in fact! God gives us no "secind chance after death" (ie "purgatory") because Hebrews 9:27 very clearly states, "And as it is appointed unto men, ONCE to die, but after this, THE JUDGMENT". If we die in our sins, lost rather than saved by Jesus Christ, we go to HELL, period! That is what the Bible teaches. And as for "limbo", there is NO SUCH THING in scripture! In fact, I find the idea of a place where "unbaptised" infants and children go VERY CRUEL in light of Jesus' own words: "the kingdom of God belongeth to such as these" (referrring to LITTLE CHILDREN). We are not saved by baptism (which is ONLY valid when it is FULL IMMERSION, by the way, NOT "sprinkling"!), or by ANY work, for that matter, religious or otherwise. Salvation is SOLELY "by grace through faith" (Ephesians 2:8&9) ONLY JESUS CHRIST SAVES! There is NOTHING that we can "do" to be saved, except to "believe on the Son of God"! That's it! Period! End of story, and that is THE GOSPEL story, "that Christ Jesus came into the world to save SINNERS." (2 Timothy 1:15) I hope this will clarify these MOST important issues for you! God bless you!
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Wonderful message here. The format worked well with the words and it flowed nicely. I like the ending a lot. We should all choose well
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your words are very much open to touch the truth of this life.....thanks for entering such a wonderful entry ...
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Nicely stated. I am sure some will find it simplistic, or disagree with you that there is a hell. I know hell exists.
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