Painting the Skie

Within stars majesty I wish upon your tears
That continuously fall,
as dreams are carried away
on the nightingales song..
Memories float upon moons surface
as minds drift back in time..

Images of you and me waltz across
summer breeze, softly caressing,
like a temptresses practiced fingers
run across tender skin,your memory sings softly..
Evey-night I miss you..
But only looking up high do I see your face as our memories combine and paint the skie...

Author notes

15 poets
Up to 12 lines please
Artist Credit:MoonLight Prayer by nishiie_pie

A contest entry

Quickie/PIF/Pic Prompt Can you see the hidden image? by Carolina Moon. 600 points, ended July 16, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Slayer
September 1

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Within stars majesty I wish upon your tears

That line is pure gold on it's own! A wonderful poem. Sometimes, your talent takes my breath away.
Congratulations.

Slayer
- Angelflower
  September 1
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  Thank you very much for that wonderful comment! I'm glad that you liked it so much.. It was hard to write because theres a hidden face in the sky and I had hopped that I wrote good enough for it..
Lost Vampyre Angel
July 17

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congrats on the gold this is a beautiful poem,
i really do love it alot,
the wording is great,
all my love,
kitty xxx
Carolina Moon
July 16
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Oh my goodness, this gave me chills..in a good way. A stunning piece of poetry! Loved it!
kiwigirljacks
July 16

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Another beautiful sad piece! I see the face you see.. I also see another in this pic!

Good luck sis!
- Angelflower
  July 16
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  2 faces who would have thought
markgrif
July 16
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sullen and well writ.
- Angelflower
  July 16
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  thanks yous!!!
Xianaria
July 16
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very nice take on the prompt, i like your phrasing and sentiment.
- Angelflower
  July 16
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  Thank you very much