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Invisible

Sitting in a room full of people she is invisible,

no one sees her sitting there crying out for

the love on one that will not see her, she is

invisible to him, to the love they once shared,

invisible to the nights fresh bloom.

 

You laughed at her when she looked at you with

the love within her eyes, come to me you spoke

come to me and I will be the man that you

dreamt of  but now she sees him as the means

of torture for her hearts glow, invisible in the

sight of love.

 

Dry eyes, lonely nights looking up at the ceiling,

loneliness is in her life now for she will always

look for the one that didn't make her feel

invisible, I love you she whispers across the

miles, centuries, days, years and more, what

will she do now?  Will she still be Invisible?

 

Broken inside, all she wants to do is make it up

to you, tonight, whatever it takes, the woman

she is waited for you as she watched the time of

the clock knowing you wouldn't make her Invisible.

Nothing that she wants to do but make it up to you.

 

Invisible once more she sits in the crowded room, wondering

is she going to remain or will she take the pills she

knows she has in her drawer at home, no longer would

she be invisible................

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 INVISIBLE

INVISIBLE

INVISIBLE

INVISIBLE 

Author notes

Invisible is how I feel now... Empty, alone, cold, afraid, and not worth shit. I am fat, stupid, ugly, disgusting used goods. If you read this and call me emo what do I care. I am INVISIBLE

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  • TimeMeddler
    July 27, 2008

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    I could feel the heartache in the first verse.. of a love lived and lost, but taunting by still being so near.
    Well done.


  • Rose Darkest Night
    July 20, 2008

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    Anyway. This was beautiful sweet pea And although it was, it makes me sad to know you feel so broken Perhaps if he does not notice you? You should stopping trying to notice him? Because once your happy with yourself, it shows, and then everyone else will notice you without you even realizing it.

    Beautiful write, it told a story that flowed out and radiated to those who have ever felt like this. Great job!

  • davidbetzer
    July 17, 2008
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    Is every teenage girl in the world suicidal? Or do you, like all the others, include such ridiculous lines as a way of making sure no one will ever comment poorly on your poetry. Get over it. You aren't invisible, but you will be if you keep mooing about the backstreet boys.


  • criddle
    July 16, 2008
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    you're not invisible darlin, you're talented

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