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dreams

alone in this world
i wait for you to come
i sit in the dust
while you have your fun

lonely most days
lost for eternity
sometimes i cant feel you
even though your right by me

broken promises
torn hearts
i hate you i love you
we can't be apart

i know you dont see it
how much i care
my tears are blind to you
even though they're right there

i cry most days
ill never tell
i feel so cold inside
even though i look well

but you'll never see my pain
ill hide it from your eyes
kind of like you do to me
hiding  all of your lies

theres no escape im trapped
im in way too deep
so ill just try to look strong
but for you my heart weeps

your lost in this world
what i thought you were your not
you threw me into this cage
and now im caught

there's no escape no mercy
only pain i feel
if only the dreams you showed me
could some how be real



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  • Devilish Temptation
    November 15, 2008
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    Very well put my friend good job on this piece it's creative and powerful