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The shore of my love.

Missing image

On the shore

of my love

I leave my heart to stay

I hope the tide

doesn't come close

to wash

my love away.

The sands of time

will blow on the wind

and rest on

forgien lands

thats why I engraved

this heart so deep,

for the ruoghest

storms to

withstand.

 

 

 

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Credit pic...Untouchable_by_RiannaBearz

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  • xxvampiregurlxx
    September 8
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    srry you didn't follow the rules it was a good poem but I have to DQ it. Sorry.

    ~Ruth~

  • Angelflower Greeters member
    July 30

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    Oh! this is very beautiful! You did such a wonderful job.. You really made me tear up! lol.. I really don't know what to say.. for some reason this just struck a cord inside me.. IT just flowed so wonderfullly.. it's amazing.. Thank you very much for sharing!! best of luck!

    Angel

  • Brigitae gold member
    July 18

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    Breathtakingly Beautiful!!!

    I love this awesome poem!!! "The Shore of My Love" is so tender and sensitive, and it lovingly breathes a sprig of fresh air, sending sweet notes of joyous love resounding through the delightful Irish sea breeze... Your imagery is very soothing and refreshing, as well, awaking the senses and putting my mind at ease on a peaceful dream of finding my own eternal love (something I truly wish for!!!) Best of luck in this contest, you've written another outstanding winner!!! Peace & love, Cyn


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 16
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    Love, C

  • Lisa Haslett
    July 16

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    Excellent Poem

    This is really a neat poem you did a excellent job writing this I liked it very much,Thank you for sharing!Lisa K haslett Raytown Missouri!

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