Don't fall,
Don't stop,
Just breathe.
The pain you feel,
Is the pain I feel,
When tears streak down your cheek.
Don't fall,
Don't stop,
Just breathe.
Let me hold you,
Can I hold you,
Let me light your world so bleak.
Look into my eyes and calm the rage,
The armed sadness taking over,
Let me inside,
To unlock your cage.
I will miss you,
We will miss you,
Don't let your fingers slip.
Don't fall,
Don't stop,
Just breathe.
You need my love,
I need your love,
Just keep your strongest grip.
Look into my eyes and calm the rage,
The armed sadness taking over,
Let me inside,
To unlock your cage.
Don't fall,
Don't stop,
Just breathe.
Breathe.
Author notes
This is a song I wrote...it's not that good, but it's straight from the heart, and dedicated to those who have tried to hurt themselves, or is considering suicide. I just wanted to tell all of you: never give up. If you need help, don't ever say, "No one can help me." Because somebody can. I know it's cheesy sounding, but as I said, straight from the heart, homeslices.
Would this make a good song?
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jaded teardrop
i remember this poem/song, very good hun, i love it just like all of your other poetry...
I loved the imagery you worked in to this poem. it seems very real, like you know what you are doing... i loved it!!!
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It is brilliant, and I love it.
I can't imagine what it would sound like to music.
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Nice work.
Amazing message to a very powerful piece of poetry. I know you mean for it to be a song, but I read it as a poem, so that's my interpretation I guess
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Nice work.
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