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Just dance!

Looking  out my window today.
It's a sad and  miserable day.
And the  annoying  phone  calls aren't helping me in anyway.
But that's all right,
That's ok.
I'm not gonna worry about it today.
I got a perfect remedy for this kind of day.

Turn on the radio.
Blast it really loud.
And then  dance as if there isn't any  crowd.
Just dance
Shake your worries away.
Dance.
And all your troubles will go away.
When you dance it'll always be a good day.

Got a big test today.
I pray to God I get a A.
I bite my nails and try to think.
And crap my pen just ran out of ink.
And I can't even think.
My friend  then passed me a note.
And I  read to my self what she wrote:

Just dance
Shake your worries away.
Dance.
And all your troubles will go away.

I found another pen hooray.
And I replied back to her and say
That's the best advice I had all day.

So you know what I say.

Turn on the radio.
Blast it really loud.
And then  dance as if there isn't any  crowd.
Just dance
Shake your worries away.
Dance.
And all your troubles will go away.
When you dance it'll always be a good day.

Just dance.
Shake your worries away.
When you dance it'll always be a good day.
Dance as if there isn't any  crowed.
Turn the radio up really loud!
Just dance!

Author notes

Hey.I wrote this song about a fun way to get red of your promblems.
Also I dedicate this poem/song to my friend Ally.Because well, after I finished writing it It kind of reminded me about all the times when I was sad and she would just randomly start danceing and I couldn't help but smile.

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  • upperworld06
    March 14

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    haha nice, dancing always makes you happy = P great job, i think everyone can relate to this, thanks for entering


  • iamthebeatles
    January 29

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    This would work really well as a song. I can almost hear it as i read it. Great lyrics. Just dance is wonderful advice!

    cassie


  • Nickey Mouse
    July 27, 2008
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    Thanks.I'm working on putting it to music.And So far eh.. not to good:Sweet:


  • CloudxAeris
    July 26, 2008

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    It sounds cute to me, and if I may say so...it is great advice Music would be nice to go with this, and Ally can dance too


  • Nickey Mouse
    July 21, 2008
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    I know I have to put music to it somehow.But how?And thanks for the coment Ally and the applause


  • Sealight
    July 21, 2008
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    Wow, Nikki, this is really good! I want to hear it with music!!!

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