Landing upon beauty's sorrow
touching the wings of life
Color diminished
as scents bury the
images that move
like a kaleidoscope
Rose of eternity denied
forgivness entry to love
Author notes
Prompt: Photo above
Credit Artist: The Endless: Desire by jagscupid
20-50 words
Words: 29
My muse is dead so sorry if this is like... blah..Lol.
A contest entry
- Mesmerizing photo #1 by notorious.
399 points, ended July 17, 13 entries
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wonderful poem jetleena
i really enjoyed reading, hahaha sorry you were mistaken as me, i thought yours was better
hehe score me
good luck and take care
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***Didn't mean to call you Looney. Thought it was Luna-Midnight's poem
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hahaha...you are silly
guess again
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Lol.. it's ok..
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=P
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Forgivness's=Forgiveness
Please check your spelling...LoL
"beauty's sorrow"
Beauty being a burden? I think not!! But cool phrase.
"wings of life"
I like.
"Color diminished
as scents bury the
images that move
like a kaleidoscope"
Expertly written stanza, I likey a lot!!
"Rose of eternity"
Makes me think of a rosary..but not quite.
Thanks for entering by my request Looooney (: -
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Oh. and thank you for that little point out with Forgivness..lol.. I always have a few words that pass the spell check.. I guess I'm just that special..lol. again thanks.. fixed as well
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No worries
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me thinks that this action is whats necessary.. *kicks muse extremely hard repeatedly* its not dead sissy, its on holiday with mine. I love the last two lines a lot.
good luck sissy
kat
p.s. still kicking muse & rather hard
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Dancing to music I'd hope (:
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