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~Eros Of Lust~

So utterly in love

and burning with desire,

our mouths meet in a french kiss.

Lips that are soft tremble, rendering me so breathless.

Your lust seducing tongue is sweet to the taste as it intertwines with mine, lingering in a passionate dance upon my lips.

In a timeless moment of our love, each ravenous kiss arouses my senses,

igniting erogenous desires, as shivers of anticipation embrace me with a hunger, the promise of more!

 

When our lips meet in the heat of these rapacious kisses, I can taste and feel the true love expression of our souls.

Like a soft rose bud, that blossoms sweetly open, petal by petal, you open my heart with such tenderness, as a passionate desire builds within, until I'm in full bloom.

But these french kisses are not enough for my desirous need.

Overwhelmed, consumed in your passion, I drift on a sea of sexual bliss, as my body quivers in ecstasy, begging to feel the eros of lust.

 

With the roll of your liquid tongue you trace a burning trail upon the canvas of my body.

Aching passionate breasts rise up to meet the heat of your mouth, as hardened nipples feel the touch of your fiery tongue.

My hands reach out to guide your head further down to where the temple of my desire awaits.

Your worshiping begins as you lovingly write poetry with your tongue, upon my silken thighs.

Excitement races with every beat of my heart as the inferno of your tongue ignites my sexual hunger deep inside my sacred place.

The fire of your mouth is so alluring, your tongue so inticing, as it starts a flow of sweet honey.

 

Your lips find their way to travel one kiss at a time along the inside of heated thighs, as your mouth comes to savor and inflame the vulnerable ache inside inviting walls of desire.

My body grows tense, begging for greater satisfaction, wanting and needing all you can give.

Through moans of anticipation, your lips find there mark, as you drink in my love, so hot and sweet.

 

Lava-like stirings build inside tempted walls.

Emotions like liquid nitro, intices my body, as it is layed bared for your taking.

 

I shake, quivering and throbbing inside, for your kisses are like fire to my luscious lips.

The inferno within, burns so hot, like red flames of molten lava.

Your tongue sends sparks of passion throughout my pulsing body, as you lick the honey of my soul.

Indulging in the essence of me, your gaze wonders into mine, as you dive into the waves of my eyes, deep in the ocean of my love.

A passionate warmth envelopes my heart, making it race.

It beats like a drum, thumping hard within my breast, and echoeing loudly in my ear.

I melt as the electricity of your tongue probes the channel of my desire.

Gyrating hips rock in motion of your mouth, manourvering pink smooth lips of pleasure into face, as your taunting tongue strokes in gentle circles, tantalizing the bud of my flower, while savoring the elixiour, from which my unfolding rose drips.

With your heated touch, I become a burning flare, that brings the fire of spirited bliss, as my body responds to your caressing.

A yearning desire for fulfillment builds within, as wetness spills fast.

Body arching and hips rise,

O!  YES!  Mmmm  O!  That's where it's at!

 

Burning in the fire, I am aflame, as your divine lips and tongue ignites the climax of a volcanic erruption.

Wave after wave of exploding heat, you leave me smoldering in joy,

and satisfaction.

© 2008 Angel's Whispers (All rights reserved)

 

Hello Dear Poet,

I'd like to thank you in advance for reading my words and for any comments that you leave. Your time and review is greatly valued.

I appreciate your thoughts dearly, and I hope you enjoyed the read.


Take care and many blessings to you.

Your friend in poetry.

~Angel-anne~

 

 

Author notes

The Word Bank. ( All words must be used )

*Erogenous
*French Kiss
*Ravenous
*Climax
*Eros
*Tongue
*Thighs
*Licks
*Desire
*Touch

Rules:
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Use all 10 word bank words in your piece.
No sticky caps.
Nothing inappropriate, contest does not call for it in any way, meaning pornography, cutting, suicide, darkness, rape or the such.
Make all text able to be read please.
Enter once only, and please do not reserve spots.
Label all writes correctly.

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Comments

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  • mcfreeman
    September 13
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    Such passion!!!!


  • Elfin silver member
    July 18
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    Congratulations on your well earned gold. Val
    • Elfin


      Hi Val,thank you so much for the congratulations.It was wonderful to recieve it.I send to you many beautiful blessings of love and happiness.
      Your friend in poetry,
      ~angel-anne~

  • Asa.Rose.
    July 18

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    Wow, very very nice write, descriptive and sensual, really pleasing to the mind...though quite a few words were used repetitively, and that brought me out of "the zone" frequently.

    Good luck in the contest.

    • Asa.Rose.


      Hello,thank you so much for reading me and also for your comment and applause.I appreciate your thoughts very much and pleased that you liked my write.
      Take care and blessings to you.
      your friend in poetry,
      ~angel-anne~

  • ckwriter69 silver member
    July 17

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    Beautifully written. Your deeply passionate and sensual words always spark a lustful attraction. Good use of the word bank and good luck in the contest.

    • ckwriter69


      Hi Charley,blessings to you sweet one!
      thanks for the read and applause,your thoughts on my work always mean the world to me!I am pleased that you enjoyed,and thanks so much for the applause,as always, your thoughts are always appreciated.
      Much love and happiness to you.
      Your ap angel
      ~Angel-anne~
  • Thank you for your sensually beautiful entry, which by the way is not only deeply mesmerizing but outstanding, good luck in my contest, Josie
    • Poetryintheblood


      Hi Josie, thank you so much for your kind comment on my entry,I am happy that you liked it.It is an honor to write for you.
      Take care and much love and happiness to you.
      Your friend in poetry,
      ~Angel-anne~

  • leo2
    July 17

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    I'll comment as soon as I can catch my breath. This is the type of erotica that's peaks my interest physically, mentally and emotionally. The story and the poetry are obviously labors of love. I wish you the best in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long
    ps. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. I do appreciate it very much.

    • leo2


      Hello Leo,how nice to meet you.I thank you so much for reading my work and also for leaving your comment and applause.Your thoughts are highly appreciated and I am pleased that you liked my poem.
      Take care and many blessings of love and happiness to you,
      Your friend in poetry,
      ~Angel-anne~
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