looking in my eye
reflection could you bare
a day
ware my heart could stop
and all I've st-rived for would end
months of stomach pains
dizzy spells
packs of smokes
friends judge and plead
for me to know it hurts
not just me
but them
when i fade
my mind becomes stronger
its the delusional thought
that's stitched in my imagination
along with the picture
an obese self
all I want
is to love my self
perfection
bones
are the answer
so glare at me again
remind me
I have failed
food is the enemy
beauty is everything
so now i leave you
to contemplate ware you went wrong
reflection
you lie
that is the reason
reasons
that I'm slowly dieing
are you proud
that I crave
to meet your standerds
and my own
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Author notes
option 2
A contest entry
- pennyroyal tea. by girl shaman.
500 points, ended July 30, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PreWrite contest for my favorites/AP family/and group!!! by Kathraina.
1055 points, ended February 15, 290 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Judged-ola!
a sad write.... -
another regarding eating disorders.
i'm glad you mentioned seeing the reflection that way, and the obese image. a lot of people forget about that.
many people have a distorted image of themselves.
this was a great write, very descriptive and very accurate.
best of luck.
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thank you oh so much
ya i figured I right one about this for this contest and then it turned out so well that I gave it to my friend...she cried... -
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that's good.
maybe you ended up writing that "snapping out of it" poem you were looking for yourself. -
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ya i guess i did...haha
i deff would give my self gold
haha jking
na there were some very touching entry's in my contest that i'm happy I got to read. -
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lol then it was worth it.
o btw, i put you in my increasingly small APF i'm hoping to build. lol
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