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Spider Saying Dozen by Half-Dozen Eyes

Care free by convenience,
Action only by boredom,
A process by “certainly superior” intellect (secretly run by something less mental).
Can truth be… by self claimed sinners,
Double meanings with implications but not “meant” to insult (if understood),
Guilty to a prideful sin only by constant accusation,
(There could be an original, cool design in there, one that is free from falling alone)
But does this accepted fault buy cover from fear of a very thinly standing net.
Admitting fault one can help themselves, can be embraced by the caring
Or is pride actually by your side holding your hand, your mind, your heart.
A bionic soul is not bought, nor a fake one at that.
So I don’t know why one would effort themselves for complete unbias, uncaring…
Only hoping to buy time to see the possible snowflake stuck in the center of the web.

Author notes

this is a poem about a friend...it was written several months ago along with the other ones with my friends... this talks about how my friend is unable to escape her pride and let herself be a "friend"...

I wrote this to describe her as well as describe what i truly think of her...so i will go into explanation of the poem. first off if you will notice the sound "by" is in every line except number 7 which is commonly associated with luck of holiness (as apposed to 6) the poem is 13 lines long to symbolize the alignment of my friend to that of desire for misfortune and cruelty. the way i truly feel about my friend is the central line number seven, giving an illusion to that of a snowflake (which is a symbolizes uniqueness and beauty) as well as the said snowflake being able to be free of falling alone, aka being able to be amongst friends or other snowflakes. line 12 and 13 are also statement's of my personal opinion towards someone who is like my friend, saying that it baffles me as to why I or someone else would be willing to put effort into another person who doesn't care towards them, it then goes on to say that one might subject themselves to this only for the chance of finding the inner beauty which is stuck within a spiders web...spiders web symbolizing inner complexities, lies, traps, etc...this then also references back to the center of the poem saying that all the text is really like a spider web, a false statement that is trapping the beautiful middle, which is the 7 line (the part that is trapped in the center of parenthesis in the middle of the poem).. everything else is a description of my friend, her pride, how she acts, and so on...i could explain more into depth but i am bored now ^_^;;

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