A touch so soft and tender
to your kisses only I surrender
your words to my ear you whisper
softly and gently, full of desire
the flames of love making
only fuel me and take me higher
Author notes
the picture used here is not mine, nor did I take it, I will give the author credit for it only if I knew who it was.......
In a list
A contest entry
- 22 Words by Mrs LadyEnthralling.
700 points, ended July 28, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Time to upgrade those green shinies again! by Nicada.
1000 points, ended December 11, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is very passionate indeed,
good work mate
I can really feel this one,
as if it's a flame close to my face
well done
Samuel
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Short, but a very sweet and passionate poem. You did a great job with this, and thank you so much for entering. Blessings, Patty
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very very beautiful and stole my breath away as this was so innocent and beautiful artist good luck in the contest
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Beautiful
Good. Thanks for sharing. Short and sweet and amazing!
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WOWWEZERSSSSS!!!
Loveeee ittt.
So good,
I like reading your poetry.
This is amazing. -
Remarkable sensuality! Your gift is showing in this piece!
I loved that you made your words eroticbut the picture sweet shows that your heart is passionate yet soft.
Great write!
~Lisa~
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Lisa
lol, well thank you. This picture was the only Good picture i could pull out in the net, it does not fit the poem itself, but it sure convery the message lol,
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This is good short and sensual!
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hotchocolate
thank you, I glad you find it interesting, well i did my best even though I have gone over 22 words, lol but oh well, extras do hurt but they do not kill lol, again thanks
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