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Pretty women

how droll
how very droll
this world of ours is,
such a bland backdrop
to a dull existence
it seems
a shame
that we should live so long
or so i thought
that was until i knew you

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The Endless: Desire by jagscupid
"There are no useful drugs to escape from feeling numb"

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  • notorious gold member
    July 16, 2008

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    "bland backdrop to a dull existence"
    This line is snazzy...really kicks some ass. And though this line describes blandness, it doesn't read off as bland at all!!

    Thanks for entering (: