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friends forever.

'I have to pee'
she said to me,
& then she walked away.

the best of friends,
until the end,
no matter what they say.

she walks back down
& with a frown
she reads this poem's end.

she laughs at me,
i go to pee;
yes, we're the best of friends.

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  • aanika
    July 29, 2008

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    u know u loveee it.
    and yes we are the best of friends

    i rmbr trying to write another poem like this quickly about cupid
    but it didnt work

    see, youre my only inspiration

    <3


  • Dalaney gold member
    July 26, 2008
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    lol...this is darling! thank you so much for entering. love, lane

  • aanika
    July 18, 2008
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    ..


    • etoile
      July 20, 2008

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      we really are the best of friends
      seriously.. who writes poems about their friends peeing lol
      iloveyouuuu<333