Jack be nimble,
Jack be quick,
Jack killed people with the candlestick!
Jack was rude,
Jack was crude,
Jack was also very nude.
Jack, a rapist,
Jack, a killer...
Sorry, Jill, you're not on his pillar.
C'mon people,
Let's get him now...
Don't wait for him to kill our cow!
A contest entry
- Monster Madness by Dark Otter.
1000 points, ended July 23, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nursery Rhymish
which is quite a crimish. Very well done, dark and demented, Jack shows some true potential as a bad guy. It bought a sick, twisted smile to my face. You passed the challenge with a worthy entry. Thank you!


