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Clue

Jack be nimble,
Jack be quick,
Jack killed people with the candlestick!

Jack was rude,
Jack was crude,
Jack was also very nude.


Jack, a rapist,
Jack, a killer...
Sorry, Jill, you're not on his pillar.

C'mon people,
Let's get him now...
Don't wait for him to kill our cow!

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  • Dark Otter
    July 16, 2008

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    Nursery Rhymish

    which is quite a crimish. Very well done, dark and demented, Jack shows some true potential as a bad guy. It bought a sick, twisted smile to my face. You passed the challenge with a worthy entry. Thank you!