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one of the original hippies

shelley was one of
the original hippies.
he liked to
experiment,
if you know what
I mean.
(he was a
vegetarian, too)
his first wife
was kind of
closeminded,
so he up &
left her
& ran off with mary.
but then the
depression got him
(so they say)
& he threw himself
into the sea.
& so ended the life of
one of the original
hippies.

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  • stoneage silver member
    July 16, 2008
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    The story ends so sad, but he ended his life.
    Was this a choice?
    Hippie is such a broad term, what is a hippie?
    Smart enough to give thanks to nature?
    Smart enough to recognize the nature of man?
    In some later stage we wrinkle and become bleached
    then we emerge from another womb, we have not died
    but perhaps we love our new mother.


  • A-Sky-Lark
    July 16, 2008
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    interesting