I am sorry, I am sorry I am sorry
sorry for the times of us a part
sorry for that day when
I broke your heart
I am sorry for all of the pain
this may have cost
I am sorry, I am sorry
I am sorry for all that have past
sorry I failed to fulfill my
promises I am sure I have lost
sorry I said our love is so strong
it won't break, it will last
I am sorry for all of that you missed
your touches, reminded me of the woman
that I used to love, adore, that I missed
I am sorry for the loneliness you feel inside
I know I left you broken hearted, but with a smile
deep down you weep, you bleed you cry
I am sorry I walked out on you
sorry for the way I left
it sure hurts, I know I don't.
deserve you, that I regret
in your heart I painted your
fairy tales, like heaven in a canvas
I am sorry, my heart had
fallen for another woman
I am sorry my heart have lost
you, now I know that lust
the moments of us together
those I thought would last
sorry for telling you that,
I will be by your side from the start
sorry for the hurting, and the hard fall
my heart longs for you, that I recall
sorry I fell out of love, and went to her
I know, you thought I did not care
sure it was wrong of me, it was not fare
left you alone, to the sky you stared
I am here now my love, I do care
I am here now my love, I do care
Author notes
this was written to be in a different contest, but it was overused for that contest, so I am using it for this contest and will post it here for all to read, well hope you enjoy the poem, I just write them and post them here for you to read and comment on, thanks for visiting. have a great day
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A contest entry
- && I miss you [more than ever] tonight by Kiss the girl--x.
700 points, ended August 8, 2008, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - "All Apologies" by Auburn Sunrise.
2000 points, ended June 22, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Aww... how sweet, sincere, and heart-wrenching.
Sometimes life, love, our hearts lead us in the opposite direction and we wonder if we made the right choices.
Lovely. Thanks for entering!
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This was full of so much sincerity, I think this was especially shown through the last two lines.
♥
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kiss the girl--x
thank you for the comment and I sure do know that i did not do a whole alot, but it sure touched others, well come back for some more,
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thelegend
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Wow,
You are really sorry.
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you think?
Am I? lol armygirlfriend, wudup how have you been, hope you doing ok and am glad you liked this piece,
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Beastly Bro.
Lol. Havn't talked to you in what seems like forever. I'll be home on sunday so I'll be on the computer more...And I'm doing fine just a lil home sick. lol. I hope your doing alright!!!
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<3Kels
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This was so heartfelt...Your words are deep with sincerity. It tell of remores and a hopeful forgiveness.
The last few lines were beautiful and my favorite!
Hugs
~Lisa~
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yup!!:)
lol, yup i did the best I can to simply put it down on the table, lol so where have you been hiding? well write me back
***hugs***
thelegend
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Yup!
You did the best you can!
Oh i havent been hiding..just running around in my super mom cape and writing very strange poems in protest for freedom on AP, lol
Don't worry always near.
Hugs
~Lisa~
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cool
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Samuel
wudup brother, how have you been, hope all is good and hey you have not been around my world for a while come on back here, lol yeah man i tried to penned it right but that was the best I could do, lol
***thelegend***
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