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Doesn't Need One

Am i now invisible:
Now that you have taken all you want
Im no longer of any interest.
This was told to me
Time and time again
With great emphasis.

As they cared for me.
Their emotion was thrown away:
Willingly discarded.
The emotion left after all this?
Nothing
I was left confounded.


Completely broken.
Now i look a fool.

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