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Come back

Whispered words in waning hours;;
come back to me.

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Enjoy. I know it's short, but i have to go. I might lengthen it later.

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  • aaaaaaaa
    July 25, 2008

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    for such a short write you really paint a broad and powerful picture. I can just imagine someone in their bed with such a desire for someone else to just whisper wishes for them etc. but why did you use two semi-colons


  • Kiss the girl--x
    July 20, 2008

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    I love this. I love its perfectness, I love how its captured perfectly all in two lines.

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