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Nyian Panda

Ci baak nyian e panda
e kedi yiin a puol nyianda
han col Jet math panda
yin nthiar a pai diit nyianda
piandie e thiau ne yiin
ku guopdie e wei ne yiin
ke gaar e nthier du ke ha
ku aba ber dthuk nthom nyianda
yiin  a puol guop nyian panda
nthier die aci kol ne puoic nyianda
luk yi piou ku kony han nyianda
nthier die ci kol ne puoic nyianda

Author notes

this is written in DINKA Language, and I hope you enjoy reading it. BTW, I am a bilingual and speak four different languages.

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  • Hebz
    August 24, 2008

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    I would like to know the meaning of the poem, for it sounds good, & a trophy winner too

    Thnx for entering & Best of Luck : F

    GloriousGift
    Heba


  • xXDarkChildXx
    August 14, 2008

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    wow... I understood nothing ^^' But all I really can say is, congrats on the trophy, and that's really cool that you are bilingual... I'm getting there! lol Just need to learn... a lot more. Nice flow, keep on writing!

    xXDCXx


  • 2lullabyhaven
    July 17, 2008
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    Congrats hahaha I have no clue, but you did something right, didn't you? smile and lol


    • theburninglegend silver member
      July 17, 2008
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      lol

      2lullabyhaven

      I sure did something right, and it is a poem is basically asking a girl to open uo her heart and to take me as her lover, and I am basically appreciating the beauty that I see in her, but hey thanks for the oportunity lol, I guess I have done fabulously Good in this contest.

      once again, Yiin Ca lec apai diit

      it means, thank you very much lol


  • retribusive
    July 17, 2008

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    Not too bad. Hahaaa, the panda happens to be my favorite animal, not that it has anything to do with what it may mean in the language you've presented.

    I love the flow. This is good.


    • theburninglegend silver member
      July 17, 2008
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      Holyman28

      hahaha, thank you, I know I kinda put it together here knowing that people were going to be lik hey look he got it mix up, but it is not, I wrote this in DINKA and is all pure, no english or other languages, lol
      again


      Yiin Ca Lec Apai Diit
      it means thank you very much, lol

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