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Jus Ma Style

The way I walk, the way I move
like I'm goin to war, a soldier relaxed in his groove
I'm smoothe
suave
hey what can I say,...
That's jus ma style.
Ma voice, ma talk, The way I speak,
slipping from slang to speakin properly
or speaking in slang intelligiently
like an expert in ebonics and linguistics
you wont miss it see?
I put it all in ma poetry
so you know its me
I'm like a classical masterpiece,
freelanced to a hip hop beat.
Smooth, mentally arousing,
I am Jazz, I am gospel, I am r&b
Hardcore Rock when I wanna be
its all in ma poetry
it's all in me
That's jus ma style.
I am the descending runs within the musical, soulful voice of a black sistah
smoothe, distinct in every note, sexy to the ears, soothing to the listener
entertaining to the reader
I am ma style, and ma style is me
I'm like the many different rocks in the sidewalk concrete,
unchangeable,
I'm like quicksand, I go deeper, and deeper, and I pull you in with me
deeper if you resist me.
That's jus ma style you see.

Author notes

This the first poem I've written in a long time so sorry if its not that good.

A contest entry

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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 22, 2008

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    this was good i like this i think you did a awesome job good luck in the contest


  • caramel314
    July 21, 2008
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    100% you

    this reflects you as a writer and a person completely. This is goin on my favs list.lol


  • caramel314
    July 21, 2008
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    100% you

    this reflects you as a writer and a person completely. This is goin on my favs list.lol


  • SOLS.Moonlight
    July 19, 2008

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    This poem had a relaxed tone as if it was you just being you. I liked the descriptions you gave throughout this piece. Much luck to you in the contest.


  • Writeous
    July 16, 2008

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    Missed the flows of your words scattered across the page..smooth dead to my eyes ma..Loving these lines

    "I'm like a classical masterpiece,
    freelanced to a hip hop beat.
    Smooth, mentally arousing,
    I am Jazz, I am gospel, I am r&b
    Hardcore Rock when I wanna be
    its all in ma poetry
    it's all in me
    That's jus ma style."

    Keep kill'em

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