hands touching you
groping you
stroking you
raping you
soft voice saying your name--
playful and game
for whatever you might
have in mind.
a scenario weighing on my mind
lately--
deep-seated disquietude,
i greatly
fail to suppress.
you console, and comfort
coddle, and subdue
with things only we share
kissing, touching,
gazing, rubbing tattoos
my dread is stifled
momentarily as we carouse...
but yet
my fearful heart strums anticipatory blues...
your eyes avert from me
just for a moment
and this is what i see:
licking, kissing, moaning,
roaming, tickling, giggling
touching, groping, stroking.
raping my trust
of you--
cheating.
Author notes
Option #2: something I fear
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Comments
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that was really amazing!
i loved the visual aspect of the poem.
thank you so much for entering
and good luck.
taylor. -
verywell done
I could not have found a better way to describe this fear/emotion myself, and at the same time noone could because it has a personal flair that only the writer themself is quilified to have,and this emanates that in volume withthe way you worded thie piece and layed it out. A very personal write, I feel empathetic when I read this piece..............
"a scenario weighing on my mind
lately--
deep-seated disquietude,
i greatly
fail to suppress."
I too, have been where u are at in this write, and can relate to such emotions and it is in its self a mental affliction at best....and u describe it as such very beautifully..very well done writer!!good luck in my contest, and plz do not reply tothis comment until after the contest.
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Engaging and good.
Yes, very engaging poem; enjoyed the whole thing.
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