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Lightning Bugs at Night


playful twinkling
under the ivory moon
melodic darkness

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m2lost24get

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  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    July 22, 2008

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    Awww, the joy of Summer *sighs*

    This is awesome, paints a very nice picture of the prompt
    I wish you the very best of luck with your entry!
    Claire x

  • saddie23
    July 20, 2008

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    Wow!

    I like ur ku, ur lines r so playful from the first to the last line. Very good, and good luck in the contest. Saddie23


  • Harrisham Minhas
    July 16, 2008

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    Thank you for your Haiku:

    playful twinkling
    under the ivory moon
    melodic darkness

    This is well-expressed.

    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas