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Soul of Flies

Sexy
      Maggots and the Lord of Flies
Rotten
      Lust for skin and pretty flesh
                  Are you dying
            On my heart
                  Are you crying
            On my doubt
                  Do you love the pretty man
              Do you hate the manly lass
        Fuck me sweet, oh darling dear
        Disgust my love, make true my fears
    I hate myself, yet love you so
            Oh, how could this be
          Dost thou feel safe being loved
                          by hate?!
            Sexy, Great Lord of The Flies
            Kill my flesh and rape my mind
            But keep my soul for Rocio
            And please let her be saved
From Me.

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  • movedon
    July 16, 2008

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    Interesting. Nicely done with the Lord Of The Flies analogy. This is a beautiful poem written for an equally beautiful Rocio. Good work. A lovely poem.

    Warmest,
    Mylee