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Leap into faith

Frog jumps in moment
waters surface breaks
concentric circles

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Amazira, alias Gregory Schrupp

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  • grannyeri gold member
    August 2, 2008

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    Liked that last line - easy to visualize these concentric circles radiating outwards. Like these haiku contests...


  • Harrisham Minhas
    July 22, 2008

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    Thank you for your Haiku:

    Frog, jumps in moment,
    breaking surface, ripples spread,
    concentric circles

    Beautiful imagery has been created in this Haiku.
    Well-expressed.
    'concentric circles' reminds me of a Haiku which I wrote a while ago.

    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    July 22, 2008

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    Ooo I wrote one like this the other day but it went on about a bird ... and then one a fish
    Love the imagery of this; well done ^^

    Good luck with your entry!
    Claire x


  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    July 16, 2008

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    This poem massages the brain to life to visualize the imagery here. The first line, Frog, jumps in moment got my attention right from the start. Enjoyed the moment, thanks for sharing.

    Dennis


    • Dark Otter
      July 16, 2008
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      Dennis, thank you

      For such kind read, I tried to give it a Zen taste.


  • Harrisham Minhas
    July 16, 2008
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  • onesugar gold member
    July 16, 2008

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    I like this - I can just picture this happening
    I had a go at doing these last year
    Good luck with this Greg
    Love ~sweetness~ xxx

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