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shifting lines


shifting lines
disect morning light
a spider waits


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I was on a ginko, too. (myron says "ginko" is a haiku walk)

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  • Ellis gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    I like this one. The images are terrific; that spider is a knockout.


  • azure85 gold member
    July 18, 2008

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    shifting lines
    disect morning light
    a spider waits

    Oh, I like the use of ginko for a nature walk, that is cool. I like the images very much in this haiku, your AHA moment is very good. Thank you so much.