Being in control of inner vices is more relevant than any designer drug, or alcohol.
Author notes
written 7/16/08
A contest entry
- Prompts- round 1 by MortalPhoenix.
600 points, ended August 12, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please leave comments,I appreciate the feedback
Comments
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Very true.
I have seen people destroyed by such vices, people I knew were capable of great things. It saddened me to see them throw away their lives...
I would have liked the wording to be a bit more poetic, but on such a harsh topic, I think the forward wording without fluff worked well.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
