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Control

Being in control of inner vices is more relevant than any designer drug, or alcohol.

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written 7/16/08

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  • MortalPhoenix
    July 16, 2008
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    Very true.
    I have seen people destroyed by such vices, people I knew were capable of great things. It saddened me to see them throw away their lives...
    I would have liked the wording to be a bit more poetic, but on such a harsh topic, I think the forward wording without fluff worked well.

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