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Guiltied Gills That Breath The Sense

selfs movement creates convenient discomfort towards moment that travels petty in a pretty way

raising a challenge but only a challenge we know there's chance of us winning
because, to compete in something we may not be able to complete may get left creeping at the back of our brain as comfort of disappointment

we do not feel guilty
we give guilty

our heads are small siamese twins as our pupils for eyes
we cannot disguise the fact that we live and fear
we cannot put ourself into place

we see what we see, we see ourselves in our children
we do not see what is not seen from 10 mile radius

we see these things when we see ourselves in the mirror
we also see them when we engage in conversation
looking at other people
around the atmosphere
you know yourself is present
but you know your soul is not here

we confess and feast in observation

we do not feel guilty
we give guilty

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 17, 2008

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    Quite a innovative approach while revealing the struggle of this life..wonderful indeed.....well done...


    • LeanneBridgewater
      July 17, 2008
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      thankyou

      very much
      glad you thought it were a well one
      thanks for opening the contest

      xx