selfs movement creates convenient discomfort towards moment that travels petty in a pretty way
raising a challenge but only a challenge we know there's chance of us winning
because, to compete in something we may not be able to complete may get left creeping at the back of our brain as comfort of disappointment
we do not feel guilty
we give guilty
our heads are small siamese twins as our pupils for eyes
we cannot disguise the fact that we live and fear
we cannot put ourself into place
we see what we see, we see ourselves in our children
we do not see what is not seen from 10 mile radius
we see these things when we see ourselves in the mirror
we also see them when we engage in conversation
looking at other people
around the atmosphere
you know yourself is present
but you know your soul is not here
we confess and feast in observation
we do not feel guilty
we give guilty
A contest entry
- as we are... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 17, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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Quite a innovative approach while revealing the struggle of this life..wonderful indeed.....well done...
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thankyou
very much
glad you thought it were a well one
thanks for opening the contest
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