I had a dream...
Oh my!
It was a dream-cum-true....
You said
'I love you as I love to sin'
---And then
you pinned me down to bed
and kissed
and rubbed
and licked
and sucked
and scratched
and bit
and ate
You fingered deep
Oh my...
you fucked me hard!
My blood was in commotion
in lustful motion
And then
there was explosion
How pleasureful!
How lustful!
The walls of dream were broken
...And then
I found myself all wet
in silken sheets
Oh my...
I WAS A LUSTFUL OCEAN............................
Author notes
I'm pretty SINFUL but you are absolutely corrupting me, honey!
A contest entry
- Lady Love (Adult Lesbian Poems Wanted) by Sesheta.
300 points, ended September 13, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
An Open Invitation.....What do you think?
Comments
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Ive read a couple of your poems and couldnt decide which one I like best. They are all sexual works of art. Very lovely piece of writing from a very lovely woman.
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Crazy?...
...no just the joys of youth in their natural beauty.
Congrats you have a fan without the explicit words.
Freedom in check is the best way to evolve in happiness.
You have written emotions in a lovely beautiful way and the last line is the killer.
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i'm officially addicted to you poetry.
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this is sinfully raw and that is honestly what i like about, don't know how i missed it, keep it flowing
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So great and indepth you are very good.
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this was beautifully written and yet so tempting. I love your work and how you lay out your poems they would seduce just about anyone it seems. Thanks for sharing and can't wait to read more of your work, I am adding you to my favorites as we speak.
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Beautiful and enticing. something that pants wantonly.
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Leonura
'Wantonly' is the most appropriate word for these socalled verses.
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exquisitely done Gal!
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Angel1002
I thank you, cutie, for your exquisite comment.
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god u have so many comments ! lol worth all of them thou, your poems are actually well written regardless of the content lol
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Rhythm Child
On the cotrary, I don't work hard on these poems. They're just to seduce my 'cuties'.
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This is great! I love your imagery and metaphor in this one. Well done and thanks a lot for sharing it here!
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Jeremy0826
Take out the imagery and metaphors.
Is there anything else left?
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ohh my godd
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UnHoLy-VeNgEaNcE
Ever had the same experience, cutie?
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Again, another brilliant poem filled with a passion that just screams out to me! Very well done, so well done I might just have to go wake the Mrs up...
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AraLupus
Thanks for your appreciation.
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this is amazing girl you did great
kira
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demonheart
Your heart is red and full of blood, Kira!
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I think that you are really good with lesbian poems and they just sometimes seem to really connect with a thing inside of me. I don't know why--other than being bi--but it's probably because you are such a good writer with good visions, which can never be bad.
I enjoyed everything about this and look forward to reading more hot writes of yours, and I'm sure they'll all be amazing, steaming and just plain fabulous.
I'll read more of your stuff a little later... but right now, it's sleep time--almost.
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Upon Deaths Meeting
A wonderful comment, sweetheart!
I love you for each word you write about me...and for your sweet thoughts...and everything...
Your Gal
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to the point ~ very raw and skin-full
my mouth was open, when i read it~
you didn't hold back like when in the act of passion~
this is the 1st poem that real surprised me!
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Verlecia
Unique comment!
I try to act as I really feel....during 'the act of passion'....
Kisses!
Galaxy2
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Just the title sounds epic and erotic!! Good night nurse and put me to bed. Do I sense some pented aggression?
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I bet you were a lustful ocean filled with waves of desire! I enjoyed it and plan to write a short erotica piece myself using Lustful Ocean and Sinful Seaside for they seem to be beautiful words that should be able to work in any type of write. Lustful Ocean automatically made me think Sinful Seaside. Thanks for sharing and even doing some inspiring
Ted E
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Ted E Bare
Welcome dear!
I'm happy I helped in making you erotically creative...
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I think I'd like to corrupt you beautiful
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I like the repeated "Oh my" parts.
I don't now why.
It just made me smile.
Great write.
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sheltered
I appreciate your comment. Thanks alot.
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I really like the "lustful ocean" line, but thought you could have used more metaphors for this piece to make it stronger. There is a lot here and its obviously a passionate work, but it lacks a certain "delicacy" (for lack of a better word). The wetness and ocean work well together and I think you could really build more with that. Obviously, I think this has merit otherwise I wouldn't have written so much. Keep writing!
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Jazzcat
I thank you for your good comment.
My poems are not meant to be treated as pieces of art...but as pieces to get pleasure from...
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having a guy in on it, that's not always bad. some guys are actually really good. this just makes me want to show you how good they can be...
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The Joker Mask
Thank you...
only girls may be added...
boys can act only as the Peeping Toms...
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EXCELLENT!!...it kind of reminds me of Jack and Sally on Nightmare before Xmas...kind of like an adult version that they didn't show the kiddes....very very very good job here, adding you as a fave
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blaq roze
There's a possibility for more shows...
for adults only...
Thank you, dear!
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This poem is very good. I bet you can make a saint render to temptation.
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Dajuan
For girls...yes...
Thanks
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Ew!
Your poetry has a way of making me wish I was a female. Just for one night. Ew!
But still I am glad to be male.
Best wishes in the contest. Loved your last line. Lustful ocean......
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dillipickle2
Thank you....
I don't mind women...
even if they're 44 years old
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you no i love this
this was great. i love the detail that you put in this another great one that will linger in my mind
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cherrysmile
And you know...
I love you....
all of you....
from top to toe....
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... Wow...
So descriptive! Yep, I love this poem a lot. I love your work a lot. ;]
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Kokokitti
Kokokitti...I love that name....sounds sexy like a pussy cat....
You love my poetical work...perhaps?
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Oh! I'll bet she does. ;]
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Oh my this made me HOT! I've never had a woman but you make it sound SOOO good.
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crazymomma
You never have one till you have one....
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lol just the poem i expected to read from you wen i clicked ... hugs n good luck xxxx judie xx
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The Poetic Angel
Seems I'm notorious enough...
Thank you, hun!
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Damn...you made my heart stop.
Sexy and pussy throbbing as always luv
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VampireSeductress
I did not intend to stop your heart, dearie!
but I did intend to make your sweet ..... throb......lol
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Blood rush!!
so breath-takingly intense!
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azureize
Take a deep breath, cutie, otherwise I'd have to use my mouth to help you...lol -
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that might not be a bad thing! -
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azureize
It may not be a bad thing...but what might ensue must be too kinky to be condoned....lol
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Excellent Poem
This is good girl you did a lovely job writing this!How have you been?Very well written,Excellent poem!Keep up with the writing!I liked it very much!Thank you for sharing!Lisa K haslett Raytown Missouri!
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Lisa Haslett
Hi, my sweet Lisa K Haslett Raytown Missouri!
I'd like to kiss you, honey, for each letter of your comment....
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Nicely done.
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Desires-Muse
Thank you, dear!
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Oh my!!!!!! This was a dream cum true.
How sexy, I love dreams like that.
Good luck.
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Ho74pp1eP1e
I prefer the real things, cutie!...
Shall we....?......lol -
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You are such a flirt. lol
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Ho74pp1eP1e
Yes, I am.
I start with flirtation...
and then.........lol
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This is really good!!
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hotchocolate
Thank you, my tasty chocolate!
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