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Inspiration or a Prompt

The padlock of perfection sealed the gates of hell, condemning us to reality.

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  • Never.Give.Up silver member
    July 18, 2008

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    WOW, this really makes you think of striving towards perfection.

    Great work and I wish you all the best in the contest.

    Rose


  • notorious gold member
    July 16, 2008

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    Very short...

    Should be 'condemning'
    Watch your typos!!

    Otherwise, I like this a lot Luna..."padlock of perfection" rolls off your tongue like WHOOT and "condemning us to reality" is brilliant, with the hellish aspects in mind...Although, one could argue that reality=hell

    Depends how happy you are I guess...great write & good luck

  • MortalPhoenix
    July 16, 2008

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    It definitely does inspire and give something to really think about. This was exactly the type of entry that I was looking for. Thank you and good luck!