Misty eyes flow tears of longing,
grazing rose petals with melancholy tales.
Juniper and lavender vases of apologies,
absorb despair permeating through pores, of broken hearted sweat.
The warmth of your touch lingers, taunting me.
Memories fill my vacant stares, the pain,
pinpoints dispersing through out my body,
shedding slowly from my embered skin.
My heart, modeling clay, reshaping itself
as the grains of time drain slowly.
Author notes
Picture prompt:Artist Unknown; found through Google.com.au
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I adore the first line of the second stanza.
The whole write is excellent and beautifully penned for the picture
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Thank you & Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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Excellent
Such a powerful creation for the contest. Your words as always are so eloquent and rich. Best of luck in the contest.
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fantastic take on the image
Juniper and lavender vases of apologies,
absorb despair permeating through pores, of broken hearted sweat.good luck in the contest
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Excellent take on the picture--Your words breathe life into it --
Well done & best of luck in th contest!
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aww wow, ths is a wonderous write, and the picture is so sad, terrific! good luck in the contest and take care
stephanie ♥
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