Hush!
Listen to time
whispering
through eternity.
A contest entry
- Prompts- round 1 by MortalPhoenix.
600 points, ended August 12, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I LOVE the lines;
Listen to time
whispering
through eternity.
It makes me dream of tunnels in which time is squised through in a never ended cycle.
great work and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Rose
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Minimalist--and yet overflowing with resonance. Excellent.
Bill
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time
one must stay very quiet then.......lovely
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Such an interesting picture to use as a prompt - see that eye there and want to think about seeing, but hearing is a sense too and fits right in here.
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I like it.
Good luck.
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This really made me stop and think. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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Not exactly profound, I suppose, but it does make one like to stop and smell the roses. The well-stated undercurrent of time is something we never appreciate enough, do we?
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Brava!
We missed you for eternity, glad you are here!!!!
Jane
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Short, straight to the point and very precise in the message behind the lines
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